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Martha Reyes Gómez ([email protected])
Enviado: viernes, 15 de junio de 2012 07:37:58 a.m.
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GOOD JOB GUYS. CONGRATULATIONS. CONTINUE WRITING A LOT AND YOU'LL LEARN A LOT.
REVISEN EL MANEJO DE POSESIVOS (MY, YOUR, HIS, HER, ETC.) NO LE APUNTARON A NINGUNO, LO MISMO
LOS PRONOMBRES PERSONALES (i, YOU, HE SHE, THEY,ETC.).
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To: [email protected]
Subject: Cuento
Date: Thu, 17 May 2012 20:02:42 +0000
El deseo de extrella (Español)
Existia un pueblo llamado coral donde vivia una joven de 14 años llamada extrella, ella era huerfanapues su
madre murio cuando ella nacio y su padre de un infarto a los 2 años.
A ella la crio una abuelita,le dio toso lo que ella necesitara, pero cuando ella cumplio 14 años la abuelita no
aguanto mas y murio, extrella se quedo sola, sus amigas salian toos los fines de semana de paseo con sus
familias y ella se quedaba en casa sola.
se aproximaba su cumpleaños, ella queria tener una gran fiesta juntoa su fmailia pero sabia que era
imposible, ella deseaba estar con ellos y queria eso haci no importara lo que tuviera que hacer. Llego el dia del
cumpleaños y ella penso que podia hacer para estar con su familia pero la desicion que ella tomo era
imposible de creer ese mismo dia salio en el noticiero a las 7 de la noche que una niña se mato y dejo una
carta que decia ''Por fin se me cumplio el deseo de estar con mi familia'' sus amigas llorando por la desicion
que ella tomo no lo podian creer pero ellas sabianque eso haria feliz a extrella entonces en su funeral le
dijieron sus amigas '' espero que estes muy feliz eso es lo que nosotras queremos'' .
fin
Star'S desire
THERE WAS A TOWN callled Coral where lived a GIRL WHO WAS 14 years OLD. HER NAME WAS Star. She
was orphan BECAUSE HER mother died When she was boRN and HER father DIED BY A HEART ATTACK two
years LATER.
She GREW UP WITH HER granny WHO GAVE heR all WHAT she needED. But when she WAS 14 years OLD heR
grandmother COULD not SUPPORT ANY MORE and died.
Star WAS left alone. She saw HER friends HANGED OUT all the weekENDS WITH THEIR FAMILIES and she
remaIned ALONE at home.
HER birthday was COMing, she waNted to have a great PARTY with HER family BUT SHE KNEW IT WAS
IMPOSSIBLE; SHE WANTED TO BE WITH THEM no matteR WHAT SHE had TO do.
IT WAS HER BIRTHDAY AND SHE THOUGHT ABOUT WHAT could SHE do to be with HER family. But the
descision SHE TOOK WAS impossible TO believe: that same day ON the news AT 7 O'CLOCK ANNOUNCED That
girl COMMITED
SUICIDE and leFT a letter saying9c2-a73a-158d1f
"FINALLY the
desire of beING with MY family IS SATISFIED.
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a girl COMMITED SUICIDE and leFT a letter saying "FINALLY the desire of beING with MY family IS SATISFIED.
HER friendS, CRYING by the deCiSion SHE TOOK, could NOT believe IT but they khew that IT would MAKE
STAR happy. Then in HER funeral THEY SAID: WE WANT YOU TO BE very happy that is WHAT we
WISH.
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The star desire
Existed a people callled coral where the lived a woman of 14 years i named star, she was orphaned for its
mother died qhen she was bom and his father from a stroke at two years.
A she the cryo a granny, the he all the she need but when she turned 14 years he grandmother died and i can
not stand, star be left alone she saw his friends who salian all the end of week and she is remanied at home
one. His birthday was approaching, she wated to have a great holiday with your family but wise that haci not
mattes in that had that do i get the day of birthday and it thougth that could do to be qwith family but the
descision that it volume era impossible of believe that same day come in the news to the 7 in point of ningt,
what a girl is killed and leave a letter that i was saying that por fin is had a complished the desire of be with is
family.
their friend in tears by the desicion that in volume not it could believe but they khew that would do happy to
star then.
In its funeral you dijieron, i hope that ire very happy that is it that we.
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Integrantes del cuento de octavo
Natalia Torres
Daniela Campos
Neider Buitrago
De:
geidy daniela campos garnica ([email protected])
Enviado: jueves, 17 de mayo de 2012 03:02:49 p.m.
Para:
[email protected]
El deseo de extrella (Español)
Existia un pueblo llamado coral donde vivia una joven de 14 años llamada extrella, ella era huerfanapues su
madre murio cuando ella nacio y su padre de un infarto a los 2 años.
A ella la crio una abuelita,le dio toso lo que ella necesitara, pero cuando ella cumplio 14 años la abuelita no
aguanto mas y murio, extrella se quedo sola, sus amigas salian toos los fines de semana de paseo con sus
familias y ella se quedaba en casa sola.
se aproximaba su cumpleaños, ella queria tener una gran fiesta juntoa su fmailia pero sabia que era
imposible, ella deseaba estar con ellos y queria eso haci no importara lo que tuviera que hacer. Llego el dia
del cumpleaños y ella penso que podia hacer para estar con su familia pero la desicion que ella tomo era
imposible de creer ese mismo dia salio en el noticiero a las 7 de la noche que una niña se mato y dejo una
carta que decia ''Por fin se me cumplio el deseo de estar con mi familia'' sus amigas llorando por la desicion
que ella tomo no lo podian creer pero ellas sabianque eso haria feliz a extrella entonces en su funeral le
dijieron sus amigas '' espero que estes muy feliz eso es lo que nosotras queremos'' .
fin
The star desire
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Existed a people callled coral where the lived a woman of 14 years i named star, she was orphaned for its
mother died qhen she was bom and his father from a stroke at two years.
A she the cryo a granny, the he all the she need but when she turned 14 years he grandmother died and i
can not stand, star be left alone she saw his friends who salian all the end of week and she is remanied at
home one. His birthday was approaching, she wated to have a great holiday with your family but wise that
haci not mattes in that had that do i get the day of birthday and it thougth that could do to be qwith family
but the descision that it volume era impossible of believe that same day come in the news to the 7 in point of
ningt, what a girl is killed and leave a letter that i was saying that por fin is had a complished the desire of be
with is family.
their friend in tears by the desicion that in volume not it could believe but they khew that would do happy to
star then.
In its funeral you dijieron, i hope that ire very happy that is it that we.
END
Integrantes del cuento de octavo
Natalia Torres
Daniela Campos
Neider Buitrago
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