A COMMON ILLNESS IN MY COUNTRY
Topic sentences: Anemia is a common illness in Peru.
Reason 1: the poverty that exists in our country
Details/ example: Liver meat and Sangresita soup
Reason2: this disease is very common in children and
adolescents
Details/ example: symptoms such as tiredness, pale skin,
dizziness, and chest pain
Reason 3: the lack of nutritional education
Details/ example: example the junk food sold in national
schools
Concluding sentence: In conclusion, this is a very bad disease
for young people because in schools they have to have
learning problems as well as emotional changes.
Anemia
is
a
very
common
illness
in
Peru.
To start with, the main cause of this disease is the poverty that exists
in our country because of this most people do not have enough
money to eat healthily. For example, Liver meat and Sangresita
soup (food with a lot of iron). Also, this disease is very common in
children and adolescents so they suffer from symptoms such as
tiredness, pale skin, dizziness, and chest pain. Finally, there is another
reason which is the lack of nutritional education since childhood, this
is reflected in schools for example the junk food sold in national schools.
In conclusion, this is a very bad disease for young people because
in schools they have to have learning problems as well as
emotional changes.
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