1 level B1.2 Let’s join the dots! Servicio Nacional de Aprendizaje - SENA. Reservados todos los derechos 2013. Start up Hello dear friends! Hello, apprentices! Nice to see you again! Today, I came to Professor Brown’s office to show him the progress I have made in my project. Now, I need to write a good paragraph explaining all that I’ve done so far. To do that, we need to study the following topics: • Paragraph structure • Process paragraph • Transitions, conjunctions and linkers to talk about processes Let’s get started! Servicio Nacional de Aprendizaje - SENA. Reservados todos los derechos 2013. 2 /15 Warm up Mr. Brown: Hi, Anthony! Anthony: Professor Brown! It’s very nice to see you again. Mr. Brown: Thank you for coming. How are you doing with your project? Anthony: The project is going smoothly. Stacey and I collected a lot paper and implemented one of the recycling processes we were researching about. Anthony: I came to show you the steps we followed in order to recycle the paper we had at home. Mr. Brown: Wow! You have the step-by-step guide written down on your notebook, let me have a look at it. Servicio Nacional de Aprendizaje - SENA. Reservados todos los derechos 2013. 3 /15 Warm up Step 1 Tear the paper into small pieces (you can use colored paper too). Paper should not have food residues. Step 2 Soak the paper in a vat of water overnight , (use twice as much used paper as the amount you expect to turn into recycled paper). Step 3 Mix the wet paper and water in a blender until it reaches the consistency of gravy. This mixture is called pulp. Step 4 Place the screen in the large bin, and then slowly pour the pulp onto the frame. Make sure the pulp is evenly distributed on the screen, so the paper has an even thickness. Step 5 Squeeze out the water that remains in the pulp on the screen using a rolling pin. Be sure to queeze as much water out as possible. Step 6 Let the frame dry for 24 hours and take the paper off the frame. Now you have recycled paper! Servicio Nacional de Aprendizaje - SENA. Reservados todos los derechos 2013. 4 /15 Warm up Mr. Brown: Excellent, Anthony! With this information, I can proceed to teach you how to write a process paragraph. Anthony: Thanks! Servicio Nacional de Aprendizaje - SENA. Reservados todos los derechos 2013. 5 /15 Let´s get inside! Let´s get inside! Today, I want to show Anthony another paper recycling process that some companies and government entities have implemented. This will help him to describe different ways of recycling paper. In this section, you are going to have a reading comprehension exercise in order to prepare you for the topics of this material. Let’s start! Servicio Nacional de Aprendizaje - SENA. Reservados todos los derechos 2013. 6 /15 Let’s get inside Mr. Brown: After having a tour around this place, I have learned about another paper recycling process. I decided to write it down for you to learn! How is paper recycled? Successful paper recycling requires a set of systematic steps. The first step of the recycling process is to take your used paper to a local recycling center. At the recycling center, the collected paper is wrapped (wrap (v.)) in tight packages and transported to a paper mill, where it will be transformed into new paper. Then, the paper moves to a big vat called a pulper, which contains water and chemicals. The pulper chops (chop (v.)) the recovered paper into small pieces. After a while, the old paper turns into a mushy mixture called pulp. Afterwards, the pulp goes through a cleaning process to remove printing ink and other residues. Now, the pulp is ready to go through a hot press with water and other chemicals which will turn into a watery sheet. Subsequently, the sheet moves rapidly through a series of press rollers which squeeze out more water. Next, the sheet is heated to dry the paper, and finally, twisted into a giant roll and removed from the paper machine. Recycled paper is ready to use now. Paragraph Structure Servicio Nacional de Aprendizaje - SENA. Reservados todos los derechos 2013. 7 /15 Let’s Analyze Mr. Brown: To write a good process paragraph for your project, you need to go over the following topics: - Paragraph structure - Process paragraph - Transitional words Paragraph Structure Mr. Brown: Before we jump into the structure of a paragraph, let’s see what a paragraph is. Then, let’s check a paragraph example we were working with in the previous activity. What’s a paragraph? “A paragraph is a group of related sentences that discuss one (and usually only one) main idea. A paragraph can be as short as five sentences or as long as ten sentences.” (Osima & Hogue, 2006). In spite of the number of sentences, the paragraph should be long enough to develop the main idea clearly. For an example of a paragraph, go to (slide 17). Mr. Brown: All paragraphs have a topic sentence, and some supporting sentences. Sometimes they may also have a concluding sentence. Topic sentence A topic sentence is the most important sentence in a paragraph because it contains the main idea. A topic sentence has two parts: • Topic: it’s the subject of your paragraph. It’s what you are writing about. • Controlling idea: It announces the specific area to be discussed. Look at these examples Servicio Nacional de Aprendizaje - SENA. Reservados todos los derechos 2013. 8 /15 Let’s Anaylze Topic Controlling idea - Topic - Colombia is the second most diverse country, in terms of species. Controlling idea Colombia is the second largest coffee producing country. As you can see, both sentences talk about Colombia, but they discuss different areas. Supporting sentences Supporting sentences develop the topic sentence.In other words, they explain the topic sentence by giving more information about it. The following are some of the supporting sentences that explain the topic sentence of Professor Brown’s paragraph: - The first step of the recycling process is to take your used paper to a local recycling center. - At the recycling center, the collected paper is wrapped in tight packages and transported to a paper mill, where it will be transformed into new paper. Concluding sentence The concluding sentence signals the end of the paragraph and leaves the reader with important points to remember. Concluding sentences are normally used for single paragraphs that are not part of bigger texts like essays or projects. However, paragraphs that are parts of a longer piece of writing don’t need concluding sentences. Servicio Nacional de Aprendizaje - SENA. Reservados todos los derechos 2013. 9 /15 Let’s Anaylze A process paragraph Explains how to do something, or describes how something is done. The process should be described in a series of steps that follow a logical time order. Mr. Brown: Now that we know the structure of paragraphs, it is time to learn the characteristics of a process paragraph, so we can help Anthony write his. Steps to write a process paragraph Mr. Brown: To write an excellent process paragraph, we need to take into account the following steps. Click on each step to learn more about it. Step 1. Write a solid topic sentence. Use the topic sentence to tell the process that will be explained in the paragraph, and then, what your opinion about the topic is. Don’t write: This is how you ride a bike. Write: If you want to ride a bike, there are some important steps you should follow. Step 2. Write sentences to explain the process. The body of the process paragraph is all about the steps. The sentences should give the directions to perform a task. It will give the reader a set of instructions in time order. Tip: it is helpful to make a list of all the steps that need to be followed, and use transitional words, like connectors and linkers for good flow of ideas. Step 3. Write a concluding sentence. The concluding sentence should remark on the important points of the paragraph you want your readers to remember. Transitional words Mr. Brown: Today, we are going to learn some transitional words and conjunctions which are used to connect our sentences and turn them into paragraphs. Servicio Nacional de Aprendizaje - SENA. Reservados todos los derechos 2013. 10 /15 Let’s Anaylze Transitional words, also called linkers or adverbial conjunctions, are phrases or words used to connect one idea to the next. They are used in paragraphs to connect sentences. There are different kinds of transitional words depending on the kind of relation the author wants to establish between sentences. Today, we are going to learn some transitional words that will come in handy to write our process paragraph. Additive Transitions Servicio Nacional de Aprendizaje - SENA. Reservados todos los derechos 2013. 11 /15 Let’s Anaylze Sequential Transitions Now, you can move on to the next section and have some practice. Servicio Nacional de Aprendizaje - SENA. Reservados todos los derechos 2013. 12 /15 Let´s practice I hope you enjoyed this material. Now, it’s your turn to join the dots and write some paragraphs of your own! Servicio Nacional de Aprendizaje - SENA. Reservados todos los derechos 2013. 13 /15 References References • BOARDMAN, C. & FRYDENBERG, J. (2002). Writing to communicate: Paragraphs and essays (2nd Ed.). NY: Pearson Longman. • CAMPBELL, G (1994). Transition Words. Retrieved on October 22th 2013, from: https://www.msu.edu/user/ jdowell/135/transw.html#anchor1701138 • FOREHAND, M. (2005). Bloom’s taxonomy: Original and revised. In M. Orey (Ed.), Emerging perspectives on learning, teaching, and technology. Retrieved on October 18th 2013, from: http://projects.coe.uga.edu/epltt/ • HAYDEN, K. (2012). How to Write a Process Paragraph. Retrieved on October 23th 2013, from: http://www. brighthubeducation.com/help-with-writing/47341-how-to-write-a-process-paragraph/ • NAYLOR, H. & MURPHY, R. (2007). Essential Grammar in Use: Suppletary Excercises. Cambridge University Press. • OSHIMA, A. & HOGUE, A. (2006). Writing Academic English (4th Ed.). NY: Pearson Longman. • SADDINGTON, M. (1993). Making Paper at Home. Retrieved on October 21st 2013, from: http://www. motherearthnews.com/diy/making-paper-zmaz93djzraw.aspx#axzz2iNGEP8LF • SCARRY, S. & SCARRY, J. (2011). The writer’s Workplace with readings: Building College Writing Skills (7th ed.). Boston: Cengage Learning • SUKALICH, K. (2013). Simple Steps to Recycle Your Own Paper. Retrieved on October 21st 2013, from: http:// earth911.com/news/2013/03/08/recycle-your-own-paper/ • N/A. (2012). Recycle Your Own Paper! Retrieved on October 21st 2013, from: http://spark.ieee.org/april-2012/athome-activityrecycle-your-own-paper/ Servicio Nacional de Aprendizaje - SENA. Reservados todos los derechos 2013. 14 /15 Credits Credits Pedagogical Direction Paul Cifuentes Carlos Javier Amaya Direction of Art César Páez ICT Leadership Yeison Ospina Quality management Ingrid Carolina Flórez Script Composition Rosa Isabel González Moreno Content Support Rosa Isabel González Moreno Multimedia Development Yenny Moiina Elvis Acosta Katherine Gómez Voices Equipo Regional San Andrés Servicio Nacional de Aprendizaje - SENA. Reservados todos los derechos 2013. 15 /15